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I love it I reallly want to read the rest D: I can't wait <3! I hope for more soon <3

love this, I’m already invested in it (is that the right Word?)

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update?

It is currently only a prologue right now, but this is officially my favorite IF~♡ I'm excited for what's gonna happen next!

Is there a way to succeed the huh no killing child ? With Aqua Terra Aer aaaand I forgot the fourth one- 

Yeah there's a right order for the elements to be in, it's written in the grimoire when you find it. Once you're doing the ritual, you need to click on the elements : the text in the next passage should be different depending if you succeeded in the ritual or not ^^

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Oh okay ! Thanks ! I tend to read too fast XD Anyway I love it ! I wonder what will happen next !

I have just a question on how did you made it- did you used Twine ? Or another one ? If you used Twine- how did you manage to understand how it work- ? x) Because to be honest I did a WIP on choicescript but I want to start back to zero- if you have time of course !

No worries, I also tend to skip passages sometimes oops

And yes, made in Twine, Sugarcube specifically. I already had some knowledge of HTML, CSS, Javascript so I think it made it easier to understand it. The Sugarcube documentation is very well explained so that's the only thing I used tbh...
Hmm, I'm pretty sure there are tutorial playlists on Youtube that explain step by step how to make a game on Twine so that could be a good place to start if the documentation is too intimidating to start with !
Honestly, I'd be happy to help you with what you need for the basics; it'd be easier to explain on my Tumblr though so feel free to ask me over there, the link to the development blog is in the description above :^)

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The story was so good! I really love how mysterious the prologue is and whatever the baby was. I can't wait for more!

Thank you ! It means a lot <33

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I can't wait for more! So far the story is off to a great start and I'm really enjoying it!

Ahh thank you so much <3 I'm so happy you enjoyed it, I'll do my best for the rest of the story :^)
And thanks for leaving a comment, means a lot !!

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I had a great read 😀 so, is the child us or one of the RO's? Or the one who has kidnapped us? 🤔 you did a great job! I'm looking forward to more ❤️

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Aww thank you so much, that means a lot <3 As for who the child is, you'll have to investigate and find out in the story hehe :^)

Could be anyone, so all the ROs and the MC can be suspicious of each other but it could also be someone else entirely - maybe whoever it is doesn't even know it's them...

As for the person you play in the prologue, I realize you might not even learn their name depending on your choices but if you get caught by the cult, the high priestess will call Sam by their name though who knows when we'll hear from Sam again in the story ~

Thanks for reading and leaving a comment !